Bricks in Motion
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This is a sneak preview for my new movie.
It's the first time I used camera movement into the real stopmotion work.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LTI6EUtvUWg
(Some of saw it already I think)
Hmm, not great. There was a small amount of light flicker, but the biggest problem was that the character didn't swing his arms while walking. You need to work on that. The rest of the animation was OK and the camera quality was great!
Yeah, my walk cycle needs some work. The light flicker problem is probably because of the lights in my room (i forgot to switch them to off).
The camera is a 9000 (ofcourse 
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I think it was over-lighted and try to avoid light flickers, like Hazzat said.
-Thijs
Bad:
-Very plain lighting, it doesn't really convey a mood
-Light flickers
-Arms not moving while walking, it looked especially strange when he just held that left arm backwards all the time
-I think the idea of a Sneak Preview, is to give you a quick idea of what the film is about. This just shows a man walking through some corridors.
Good:
-I liked how you only showed the legs in the beginning and then later cut to a shot of his whole body
-The deep rumble sound did add some tension
Try to improve on the bad things and you should be alright.
is this a sneak preview or a test? Because if it was a sneak peak it didn't tell anything, except there seems to be a background track that sound like it's from a David Lynch film. 
it's a test ok?! It's just the begin of my new film
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