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my first lego stop motion.

life sucks, but the graphics are amazing.

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Not bad! I liked it!

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Really good for a first animation, two things that I would work on though. Try to avoid moving things in the background and capitalize you title, I think that it would look much better that way. Great job though, I saw some animating techniques that most animators don't use in their first films (i.e. us).

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Juggernaut Pictures wrote:

Really good for a first animation, two things that I would work on though. Try to avoid moving things in the background and capitalize you title, I think that it would look much better that way. Great job though, I saw some animating techniques that most animators don't use in their first films (i.e. us).

thanks a lot for the feedback!
i noticed the things moving in the background before and in my next film stuff like that wont be there.
speaking of my next film, i'd greatly appreciate if youd check out the script for it, i just finished!:

http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/to … -1-script/

life sucks, but the graphics are amazing.