Topic: Tell me what you think?

This is a slight animation/effects/sound/camera pan test.....I do realize the saturation is up way too high, and what be put to those settings on the final cut.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3X83wJWVEtg

Re: Tell me what you think?

It's a little slow. What framerate do have it set at?

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its at 15

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The animation was too slow (except for his step which was too fast to be a step - it was a teleport if anything) but the pan itself was good. That's all I can say.

Before you upload a test, think "Can I critique this myself? Do I really need to show anyone else this?" In most circumstances, there's no need to post it online and this is one of those circumstances.

https://i.imgur.com/1JxY79v.png

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Either bump up the framerate, or don't take so many picures. You must be moving the minifig at too small increments for 15 fps. Also, the part where he turns is too fast. Try to balance the minifig between the studs.

Not literally dead, just no longer interested in Lego or animation.

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OK..."Do I really need to upload this online?" Obviously I did, I want to get feedback so that way I can improve no need to be a complete **** about it, there was no need to be so negative, don't worry though, I won't waste mine or your time uploading here anymore, Mr.Professional.

mod edit: no profanity please

Last edited by PoisonFilmsENT (April 15, 2011 (04:42pm))

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The framerate is fine, but the animation itself is too slow. However, the pan was still good

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Sorry my minifigs don't look like wacky inflatable arm flailing tube men.

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^ What's that supposed to mean? Sarcasm, I'm guessing. It's hard to tell because sarcasm because it's identified by a tone of voice, something that the internet lacks.

Not literally dead, just no longer interested in Lego or animation.

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Last edited by PoisonFilmsENT (April 15, 2011 (06:01pm))

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PoisonFilmsENT wrote:

Something you lack is sentence structure..."..It's hard to tell because sarcasm because.."

He was just mentioning to you that you have to be careful saying things on the internet as it is hard to tell what people actually mean. No need to get upset.

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Last edited by PoisonFilmsENT (April 15, 2011 (06:01pm))

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PoisonFilmsENT wrote:

Well going off what you just said, how would you know if im getting upset? Im not if that makes you feel better...

A few posts back you were calling people names.

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Last edited by PoisonFilmsENT (April 15, 2011 (06:01pm))

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You're not going to make any friends by behaving this way, PoisonFilmsENT. If you submit something for criticism, instead of analyzing it yourself, such as Hazzat suggested, you'd better be prepared to take the criticism you receive - and to take it civilly. I see you've edited some of your posts at this point; you may have come to this conclusion already. Nonetheless, this is not acceptable forum behavior.

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Yea, I realize that now. I apologize for all that.

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I was extremely flustered and frustrated last night, and it just seemed like they were lashing out at me, I should have handled it a lot better, I apologize sincerely for it. Please, allow me to do better for the future.

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Ok, I accept the apology. Calling people names, usually doesn't solve anything. (Thanks for apologizing though.) mini/smile

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It's okay, pal. We all get angry sometimes. Sorry about the extra "because". Once in a while, I forget to re-read my posts. Usually, I catch my mistakes.

Not literally dead, just no longer interested in Lego or animation.

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Right - back on topic that is the animation itself! mini/smile
The framerate is ok, it's smooth too but just that little too slow. It's good though because a lot of people make it too fast, so that's not a big problem. You can just take a few less pictures. The pan was also good. What kind of mechanism did you use? I didn't think the saturation was too high. I liked it over all.
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