Topic: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

This is my first edit of my upcoming film, "The Ratcatcher." I have some changes that I will be making, but so far, I think it's looking pretty good. Once I add music, I think the mood will be awesome!

Changes I shall make:
-Less camera motion
-More time on the final shot
-Making it look less like a compilation of clips and more like a film mini/tongue

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZcZ8-6Ko2Rk

Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

I like it alot mini/smile

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Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

cool but was a bit hard to follow but you said you would fix that so its good

Hi

Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

After a bit of fixing:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hnUTFk_eXaU

Tell me what you think.

Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

The camera twist made it confusing to tell what was going on. Also, the beginning was a little too fast. Good otherwise, though.

Not literally dead, just no longer interested in Lego or animation.

Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

minifig051 wrote:

The camera twist made it confusing to tell what was going on. Also, the beginning was a little too fast. Good otherwise, though.

Are you commenting on the first link or the second link?

Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

The second link.

Not literally dead, just no longer interested in Lego or animation.

Re: Opening Scene First Edit Test [Warning: Camera Motion May Cause Nause]

It was good, I am in love with the camera movement.