After reading the five reviews above this one, I expected it to be hilarious.
You used a very dark, yellow, black and red visual style for a comedy film? Not good. It totally messed up my perception of the film. Go with a clearer, lighter style. - 2 jelly things.
The whole concept of Jake and the horse did not seem all that funny. It did, however, seem perverted. - 1 jelly thing.
BertL is cool. + 3 jelly things.
Your blood effect looked like ink spray paint shooting in great gobs into the air. I am not impressed. - 1 jelly things.
All in all, go with a funnier concept and cleaner dialog, and I'll laugh a lot more.
- Leo
Last edited by Leonardo812 (February 13, 2009 (02:51pm))