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[THAC 8] Mr. Motivation

Mr. M

My entry into THAC. Not my best work by far, but I'm still happy I made it.

Last edited by Lamplight (December 19, 2010 (10:04am))

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Wrong link that's Daraghs film

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I loved it, awesome work. mini/bigsmile

And yeah, that's Daragh's film. Fix the link boi.

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Fixed. mini/lol

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Wait, how did you see his if this is Daragh's film?
sorry, nvm. hold on, watching it.

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I have never seen anything further than lack-luster. The animation and cinematography - for the time limit - were great, and I personally thought it was quite well written.

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Great job! I'm sorry about getting the voices to you late and all...

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Thanks a lot you guys. You're feedback is really appreciated. mini/bigsmile

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Out of curiosity, what part did you play?

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No one. mini/tongue

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I hate politics. mini/lol

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This was actually quite good. Although some movements weren't in time with the speaking. Like when he says "Brad, how about you?" his arms move too late. Other than this, it was very enjoyable.

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I love the part where a student tries to climb out the classroom. mini/tongue

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Review

Great entry! I've grown to really like your style. A mixture between cartoon and smoothness, it'd odd, but still enjoyable to watch. The storyline reminded me of Jstudios' film, Back to School, however I found this a bit more humorous. The idea is very simple, but a steady script holds it up. The animation, as I afore mentioned, is as normal, and the lighting very nice.

Story: 4/10
Animation: 7/10
Cinematography: 6/10
Set Design: 6/10
Entertainment Factor: 5/10
Overall: 27/50

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