Topic: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

This is my first brickfilm, and I'm using it for an english project so much advice is needed from you vetrens out there

Here's the vid:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WTLg7r2Y3Jo

Music suggestions, anamating suggestions, narrating suggestions, etc...

Whatever critism you have is welcome

Thanks Alot guys!

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

Overall, it is alright for a first brickfilm. I'm glad you have no light flicker, that is good. But one important thing is that you should NOT have a drastic lighting change as what happens at 0:16. That isn't good. Also, i'm not sure what happens in chapter 6 because i haven't read the book in two years, but try and light the background of your set a little more. It's kinda dark.

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

What was your frame-rate? It looked like 10-12 fps.

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In chapter six it is a night scene so I thought I would make it darker. Sorry about the drastic difference but as a begginer I am slow and so when I relized the focus was a problem I didn't have time to retake the first 16 seconds of it. This project is due on Thursday and at this 16second/hour rate it will never be done...

As for fps, I am using 15 and I am sure of that.

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

oh, well if its dark, i guess that's fine. I might also suggest taking more pics for movement, just to smoothen it out.

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

Thanks for the advice! Got to get to work now, due thursday and still got like 5 chapters to do... mini/sad

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

you should come up with a spify walk cycle but otherwise it was pretty good for a first (much better than my first mini/wink it was terrible)

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topitmunkeydog wrote:

you should come up with a spify walk cycle but otherwise it was pretty good for a first (much better than my first mini/wink it was terrible)

Do you know where I could learn about walk cycles? I looked at some but they were very annoying. Oh and I added another part with a greenscreen or actually a red screen for the background here:

http://www.youtube.com/user/BrickSmiley?feature=mhum

Could you guys give me some advice on the green/red screen?

Thanks alot this is very helpful

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

search "nathan wells" on youtube: he has great tuutorials. also so does "xxxfancypantsxxx"

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topitmunkeydog wrote:

search "nathan wells" on youtube: he has great tuutorials. also so does "xxxfancypantsxxx"

Thanks alot, those touritals were very good. Do you know what free programs are best for animation, sound, and masking?

I was thinking of helium frog (although it sometimes goes down it has chromakeying, does monkey jam have chromakeying?)
GIMP for masking
And Audacity for sound

To put it all together I was using windows movie maker but I would like a better program. Suggestions are all welcome.

Thanks

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

Helium Frog is wonderful, even if it crashes, it saves your animation, and you can import your frames as individual frames (great for editing) or as a video file. GIMP is without a doubt the best photo editing program out there that's free. Audacity is also fantastic.

Sony Vegas is what I am currently using; yes, it costs $100, but if you're only going to be doing this project for a little while longer, head over to the Sony Vegas website and download the free trial version. No limitations, except it will only work for 30 days. You can do everything else that Sony Vegas does though; it was extremely useful for my last school project, when I didn't have the money to buy a program.
Hope this helps!

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

OK, so I'll keep the programs I have.

Now my last issue is lighting, are there any good articles or tutorials on lighting?

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Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

Just use two lamps and try to get a light that looks acceptable. Oh, and cover the lamp with a white paper to expand light in a regular way. I'm not the best to give advices of this kind, since I use only one lamp and I don't cover it with a paper. I get light flickers in fact (although I'm sure it has to do with the camera and not with my lighting).

Re: Advice Needed: To kill a Mocking Bricd Animation

Yeah Firsts are Hard -_-
I tried it!
I followed all the tutorials on youtube!
Like topitmunkeydog said watch nathan wells and facypant's videos!
THats how I got my motivation mini/tongue
Check it out: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tB0CHMuC … ture=feedu

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