LOVE IT! amazing. the set is fantastic. i love how you could hear the gun in the distance. They panning shot was great- especially when the care drove over it... i think.

I'm planning on redoing the panning shot. The narration is slow, and the shot was way too fast. I need to stretch it out to 20 seconds at least. I'll also increase the brightness of the machine-gun man as well.
As for 0:17, that was an accident, however it helps with the story because it says "as of the approaching dawn." Glad you all liked it! I'll be increasing the brightness ever so slightly because of YouTube, but I'll keep the rest like this if you all like it.

Brickfilmer a decade ago, now looking to relive the glory days

Loved it. I could tell what was going on and it did appear as though it is a night-time sequence. Nice one.

Lg Productions

True, I was going to photoshop in some lights, however, in the story it's completely darm "but for the dim light of the moon that shown through fleecy clouds." I was going to take out the lamps entirely, be I had already shot a few scenes.

Brickfilmer a decade ago, now looking to relive the glory days

The thing is, its during a civil war. You don't want to turn on your lights in the middle of the night, because anyone of the other political side will shoot you. The street lamps are dark because it said in the story everything was dark. I actually should have removed them completely, but forgot to. Lets say they were shot broken.

Brickfilmer a decade ago, now looking to relive the glory days