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Never Make Stormtroopers Angry!
this is a short film i created while bored.
do not worry, my next film will be much better.
wadda y'all think? 
I couldn't really tell what it was about.
Lol. i have to admit, i actually had to watch it three times to get it. the first time i was like HUH? 
i then watched it again, but still got confused. Then after my third time watching it, i was like HAHAHA, that was actually very good. The animation was consistent, and smooth. no light flicker (at least, that's what i saw...) I think the story could have gone longer (just a tad bit). Maybe you could have done a first person camera view of him shooting at the other men, then he see's someone pointing a gun to his face. Then you could have shown the scene where it started. But that is my opinion- everyone's is different. So all together, i'd give it a *7/10 stars*
thank you!
i may do a remake of it with that. 
thanks for telling me what you think!
anyone else have anything to say about it?
The animation was OK, but the storytelling (as previously mentioned) was very poor, even though it was very simple.
But seriously, 36 seconds of video, 30 seconds of which is titles? Really?
yeah, as i said in the description, my next video will be much better.
any more opinions? 
Too many titles, after the first ten seconds without animation I almost didn't watch it, Pull your audience in more.
yeah, if you read the description you would have seen that i said that my next film shall be much better animated, and would be much longer.
any other opinions? 
It was ok I guess. I think it should have had more of a body to it but I liked it all the same. 
yeah, if you read the description you would have seen that i said that my next film shall be much better animated, and would be much longer.
any other opinions?
uhmmm. this is not supposed to be about your NEXT video. It is THIS video that we are talking about.
I think exactly the same as everyone else and I you should not be spamming this thread to get more reviewers. That's just stupid.
Please refrain from double posting. About the video there was way more titles and intros than animation, what I would do is just put the video without any titles or credits. There was no point in putting all that in for a 6 second short.
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