Yeah very good, but I thought a lot more could have happened...

Lg Productions

Good film. I loved the beginning when they break through the wall from the camera being in the inside. i haven't actually seen anyone use that type of animation before. sometimes, when they spoke, it sounded as if the were speaking on one of those classic olden radios- tinny and a very small effect of echo. The animation was consistent and smooth, and i likes how your set was sturdy, not moving very much. the only thing that sorta confused me was when they were in the beginning, it was all bright, but later, it was regular. perhaps you filmed those two scenes at different times and the lights moved, or was that intentional?  at the time 1 minute and 48 seconds, i loved the flame effects, but i disliked how they sort of drowsed off and disappeared. i also agree with posts above how the plot could have been better. In my opinion, yes. i think that when they were trapped inside, there could have been an action packed fight between the two of them.
     Overall, i think you did pretty well, concluding that you thought, scripted, built the set, animated, voiced, edited, and uploaded in only a matter of 3 days before the deadline. I'm impressed with your work, so i think you deserve a sub. Therefore, i have subscribed to you.   
I hope to see more! 
                                   *6.5/10 stars*

-emayesoen