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I'd like to thank everyone for giving me confidence to make this throughout, including 2287sally, Mpfist0, and JustKidden. I'd like to special thanks Just Kidden, for after I put the hard time of editing in, for him to edit the film his way, to make the film better, and bring some humor to it 
. Thanks everyone, enjoy!
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This is the hardest I've ever worked on a film, I'm surprised I have no posts, as I thought this was my best film 
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It's only been 3 hours. 
I'd say you've improved your animation a bit.
-JK
I agree with JK, the animation improved. I have to say, though, that some of the voices were hard to hear. Also next time try to work more on the sets. But yes, you're getting better 
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The animation was descent. There was some light flicker and the sets could use work. Also, towards the end the audio was so quiet I couldn't hear what he was saying. So I'm not quite sure how the whole story ended. How did the sidekick dude figure out who the murderer was?
Nothing above is meant to bash your film, it's only my thoughts about it.
I'd click the volume up, you can seriously hear what they're saying if you do so . Blame it on the editor, for putting music too loud .
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I liked it, I got kind of confused towards the end though.
-Jon64
Glad you liked it Jon, yes blame the end on my editor .
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The animation was decent. The story was confusing and rather odd. All the titles rather annoyed me, it could have done without it.
The sets weren't great.
It wasn't bad though, keep trying
Glad you liked it Jon, yes blame the end on my editor
You just blame it all on the editor, huh?
I kept the ending the same as what you had it when you sent it to me. Just added music. I would have edited the ending more, I just didn't have the time. I was on vacation, and I had to go somewhere. Plus you wanted it the next day, so it was the best I could do at that moment. Sorry, anyway.
-JK
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