Topic: Trailer - "Out-Law" Trailer

"Out-Law" Trailer

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This was for filmfights.com and it got into the heavyweights! mini/bigsmile
btw, I know the voice over is pretty cheesy but it was all I had right then and I was rushing like crazy, the whole thing was filmed and edited in (to be slightly more accurate than two days) 30 hours. It hurt to sit down that long.
Also you can vote for me here if you want! mini/bigsmile
http://www.filmfights.com/current/1245/Out-Law

Last edited by filmyguy (September 2, 2010 (12:22am))

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I love that trailer, the blood was very realistic. I  like the artificial leg that has got the protagonist. In the my Assassin's Lego series, the protagonist has an artificial leg like that.

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Once again, really creative animation and effects (its just the little things like the studs coming out of the ground when the truck skids that I love) The implied plot was very cheesy, and the cheesiness of the plot was made better by the cheesy voice-over. And I'm a sucker for cheesiness so therefore I love it.

And I want to marry the cinematography.

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The voice-over could have been better (unless you were deliberately making it cheesy... "And now he's part machine!") but the visuals were fantastic.

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That was quite epic. I think I peed my pants at how well done the animation was.

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Nice. LOVED the brick-built gore effects. You've captured the Grindhouse feel really well. Only nitpick I have is that the narrator's delivery left a lot to be desired, and the digital pans felt out of place.

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The visuals were nice, b-movie style was great, the voice-over could've been better. But good overall. mini/smile

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OH MY GOSH! THAT WAS FANTASTIC! THE VOICE OVER WAS PERFECT! THE ANIMATION, EFFECTS... OOOOOHHHHHHH!

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That was some great stuff, Sean

I loved every part of that, but like everyone said the voice-over could've been better. I liked how you did the blood, will this be made into an actual movie of yours?

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I was actually thinking of making a Bonnie and Clyde film when I saw that!

Brickfilmer a decade ago, now looking to relive the glory days mini/smile

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WOOHOO!!!! I'm going to be in the featured fight on filmfights!! Which is going to be uploaded on the Indy Mogul channel! I'm so excited!!!!
Keep a look out for the next film fights episode! I'll be sure to post it on here! mini/bigsmile

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Meh. I'm going to explain that after I point out the good in this. Wonderful animation, and great effects and hilarious voice over, this would be a masterpeice coming from an 11 year old YouTube n00b, but from someone who has seen you do a lot better I say this is by far not your best work. I'm not saying this sucks, but the really harsh lighting and plain beige background had me cringing. Sorry, but I don't love this.

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Completley epic! That was some awsome violence.

Does a fence surround a house to keep somebody out...or perhaps it is there to keep something trapped inside...

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A true inspiration. Maybe it's the excitement of Septemberfest, or this, that makes me want to film. I don't want to know but it's all good!
Very nice work, indeed.

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Hey man, just wanted to congratulate you on having all 3 of the critics on the Film Fight TV show vote for you!! mini/smile

Watch it here btw.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WjC8NrW4Zpw

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I'm soo jumpy right now, this is pretty awesome. Thanks, dude!

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Dude, I just saw the film on Indymogul, it was brilliant, and you won! Great job! mini/bigsmile

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Yeah, it was pretty good.
@Lamplight the lighting and sepia tone were intentional and had to do with the genre this was portraying.

Will you do any sort of tutorial on the blood effects? Please?

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Animation was okay, the blood effects were good. And the story was ... cheesy. The sets were a bit plain and as you said, Machete was involved. If I haven´t seen the machete trailer yet, I´d love this film. Unfortunately I did see it, so some things really took it down. For example, the ending scene.

3/5

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Hey congrats on winning the contest!

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