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Made for the Animation Challenge entry.

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Okay, well, It was good until the crater, I didn't like it for some reason. maybe because a crater makes a little hill shape on its edges.

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RealBrick wrote:

Okay, well, It was good until the crater, I didn't like it for some reason. maybe because a crater makes a little hill shape on its edges.

But that's what all craters actually do. They spew debris and soil everywhere. In a science experiment we did once, we dropped marbles into a bucket of sand. Instead of just making an indent, they also made a little hill all around the crater rim. Some of the dirt gets packed down farther into the ground when one hits, but the laws of physics force the dirt into that hill.

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I absolutely loved the animation of the brick 'walking'. That was AMAZING.  The scream in the middle didn't really fit, as it seems it jumped off of it own free will, maybe woosh sound was better suited.  The crater wasnt amazing, but none of the entries were, and you copied a real crater the closest.
All in all, 4/5

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I loved the animation but I would have loved some story to go with it

All and All 4/5

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BWCJLego wrote:

The scream in the middle didn't really fit, as it seems it jumped off of it own free will, maybe woosh sound was better suited.

Yeah, I agree. I just put the scream in because it was the only thing I had on my computer, and when I tried recording a scream it sounded absolutely stupid. So I just went with what I had, and I only had about an hour or two before the deadline, so I was rushing. The result of this was that I couldn't find a woosh sound either, so I just threw the scream in the middle. The audio was definitely a weak point.

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