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Hitman:Trailer
A Trailer for an upcoming Brickfilm...
Hmmm...
It's an OK dea overall, but you need to work on... Well everything.
Try constructing a set. Work on your animation, and lighting..
The story idea seemed good though..
to be fair, it was not that good.... 
hoping for something better, i mean the first 20 seconds or so had no animation whatsoever
u shud actually make some scenery, i hate ppl who just buy lego sets and stick them on a plate and claim that as their scenery, background or set.
Advice:
- actually show the figures talking, maybe learn facial animation.
- get better lighting sources.
- film more smoothly at a higher fps.
- improve backgrounds, add some trees or something like benches or ponds.
Good luck for next time dude 
Ok ive trid some of that stuff in my new animation booze...
Check it out...
where?
Maybe, try changing the angle to show the person speaking after establishing the scene with a long shot.
Also watch out for continuity mistakes.
-Jed
Last edited by Jed277.tv (August 17, 2010 (12:26pm))
Here http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5kKkAxkk9Qo
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