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So a lot of you guys suggested doing something simple, and we agreed, so here it is. Click it P.S. sorry about the speed, we wanted it a bit slower.
Where's the link?
EDIT: Yeah you shouldn't post it without the link. Did you push the post topic button instead of preveiw topic?
Last edited by Oromis-elda (July 7, 2010 (12:46pm))
Ok here's the faults.
1. The guy's arms go up WAY to high when he is walking.
2. The running cycle was ok but I just think it needs something.
3. The camera is out of focus. I could see the background just fine but not the minifigures, try putting them near the wall you got back there, and I think you'll be good to go!
Other than that I give it 3.4/5!
Good job!
Thanks, we'll fix those things in a second. (P.S. sorry if you get frustrated by us replying to everything, Just_a_Minifig said that we should stop doing that)
I'm ok with that. Just don't reply to everything, mine was ok to reply to.
Thanks for the comments guys. Some pretty good reviews we got, but we won't get cocky.
Last edited by Juggernaut Pictures (July 7, 2010 (02:09pm))
pretty good, do it ten more times then you'll be great.
3/5. Without light flicker, and a little more realistic walk cycle then you'd get a 4/5.
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dont judge if your not good ether
@darkmarer: uh?
JP, the minifigs were out of focus, and as they already said, the arms moved too much. And for the run, I guess the speed was okay, but I couldn't see their legs well.
Risen from the dead.
@darkmarer We tried to be kind when reviewing your film. We even mentioned that our films weren't good to make you feel that you weren't alone. But it seems whenever we critique a film, people throw a fit.
@MPfist0 Yes, our camera is bad. You can't adjust anything on it, but we'll be getting a new camera in a couple of weeks, hopefully. As for the running cycle, we'll use a different angle next time.
You're definitely getting better, but the walk cycle doesn't look right, and I'm not sure why. I think its too fast, or like what skwizitanee said, the arms swing too much. I don't know, but I'm looking forward to you doing tests with a better camera.
Last edited by Ratboy Productions (August 4, 2010 (10:14am))
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