Topic: Night Test & Beast Mutation
A night & fight test followed by our beast mutation entry. We know it's not the best, but still critique it (But not too harsh, please
).
Here is the video.
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A night & fight test followed by our beast mutation entry. We know it's not the best, but still critique it (But not too harsh, please
).
Here is the video.
Ok let the non-harshness begin.
1. The animation could of been better I give 2.9/5 Which is still pretty good.
2. The shaky cam effect was VERY bad, I just seemed like you were moving the camera WAY to much.
3.The night test wasn't very good it needed a little bit more light but not too much light.
4.The transformation was strange he went and moved grew something in his hand, something really long came out of his foot and it stopped, the screen went "black" and there was one of those star wars things there?
What... on earth was that?
It looks like you were repeatedly punching the camera between frames. And I did not get the "transformation" at all, if you can even call it that.
Well my friend, get used to "harsh" reviews or get better.
Dude, stop replying to EVERY SINGLE POST.
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