Topic: A small Hit test.

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A small hitting test.
WITH MAH NEW SET!!!!!!11!!!!11111!!!!!!1
Comment with some feedback plz!
Tell me how I can improve it, and not totally suck at it!

Re: A small Hit test.

Woah, that was really good. Improved a lot.

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Re: A small Hit test.

I've never done a test like this, how could I have improved?

Re: A small Hit test.

Well, when your hit you fly backwards after 2-3 frames of animation. As everyone with eyesight can see, he walked backwards so he didn't embarrass the guy who hit him.

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Re: A small Hit test.

Ok....
I'll try not to do that anymore!

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The guy who punched should turn back so his two feet are on the studs again.

Re: A small Hit test.

yeh that was pretty good!

like they said, have the hit guy SLAM into the bookcase, not gingerly walk backwards.

but awesome books falling out.

Re: A small Hit test.

Wow! I really liked this. Two things I can recommend though is have the person who punched him get back into the stance he was in quicker than just have him hang there. Also the second thing I recommend is you add sound effects. The visuals is only half of the film if you added sound effects to this I guarantee you it'll look much better. Don't underestimate the power of sound.

Re: A small Hit test.

WOW!!!!!!!
I can't believe i've gotten such great feedback!
I will do the moving the guy back into position thing.
And add sound effects.
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Re: A small Hit test.

I'm on pins and needles for the update of your test.

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Re: A small Hit test.

I'm in the editing stage of it right now! mini/bigsmile