Topic: Order 23 Teaser

It's almost here, it'll probably be up end of July. I hope you guys are excited also, this will be my biggest film ever. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QzWXJe5wpEU

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Re: Order 23 Teaser

It was alright, you wrote "Coming Soo" at the end, and that trailer told us nothing about the film.

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It's not a trailer, it's a teaser. They don't always explain something. They tease by not showing you anything from the actual film. This, at least, can make you curious about what they're talking about.

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Good animation this makes me want to see film.

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JUGGERNAUT PICTURES wrote:

Good animation this makes me want to see film.

My theory is confirmed =P

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Thanks guys, I hope you all want to see Order 23, because it'll be BIG.

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It's 2 parts right? And is it for A.G.?

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Re: Order 23 Teaser

ease in ease out

im not teased.

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Whether the teaser has done its job correctly, you know, we can debate... =P

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No, JP, this is for my own use, but will be probably my biggest film ever, and it'll be in five parts.

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5 parts? uh uh...

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you should make a bunch of small films first.

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I already do.

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small films that expand your technical knowledge of both brickfilming and cinema in general.

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You have to constantly do something that challenges you, more and more, as you progress.

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Re: Order 23 Teaser

I don't think animations that last 2 seconds qualify as teasers. Nor small films.

Persist.

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That wasn't at all a teaser, if anything that actually made me want to see it less than I did yesterday. The impression i got from your teaser was that the film is boring and has no speech.
This is what a good teaser is like. Another style would be like scypax's cosmos teaser, which relies on an atmosphere created with music and the right titles.
Perhaps you should do some more of your film before releasing a teaser, and maybe put one of your best scenes in the trailer rather than some soundless speech scene.

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MOL wrote:

I don't think animations that last 2 seconds qualify as teasers. Nor small films.

Six seconds of animation, besides your WWW one only had about three or four total seconds of animation, all it was, was changing camera angles, yes it did KINDA make it suspenceful, but it has to right to be under the word TRAILER.

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Refuse the criticism if you insist, but that was not a good teaser. Ten seconds of a poorly composed shot with mediocre animation of two guys waving their arms in front of a blank wall followed by a misspelled title with only a lively music track for sound does not excite me in the slightest.

The film may very will be good, don't get me wrong, but this teaser didn't do its job.

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