Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
A place to discuss, share, and create stop motion films.
Ad
You are not logged in. Please login or register.
The most intresting Brickfilm trailer ever made!!!!............NOT
Finally I made a trailer to my new film with the codename Project Cucumber.
I hope you enjoy this trailer, and I hope you also will write me a little feedback.
Oh and I want to thank smeagolstudios for voice acting in it ^^
Last edited by JediTeran (April 2, 2010 (04:13am))
I really would be happy about some feedbacks ^^
Nice choice of music. It really built up suspense throughout the trailer.
@Ark11 Thanks for your nice feedback, and I really try to find better sounds, but the page where I get my sounds didn't have better uzi sounds (woah I used the word sounds 3 times xD)
@Spades The music was composed from my personal musiccomposer, I told him how I wanted to make the trailer and he made this music, after some minutes discussing we finally could decide in which style he should make it and in which speed the music should be, and then he made the rest. ^^
I am very happy about his work, he did a great job.
-Lars
I agree that you did a BRILLIANT job on the music. I think that you didn't put enough animation in there though. It was basically a mix of two clips in random order. You need more than that. The trailer I'm working on at the minute has about 17 clips of at least 10 scenes. I'm not saying I'm better than you, I'm just trying to give you advice. You're a good animator and the story didn't sound too bad until the end. All I could say was "Er...Was that meant to happen?" and I wasn't sure if you had taken the right move, but I think you've got some trick under you're sleeve. 
3.5/5 - Enjoyable
I agree that you did a BRILLIANT job on the music. I think that you didn't put enough animation in there though. It was basically a mix of two clips in random order. You need more than that. The trailer I'm working on at the minute has about 17 clips of at least 10 scenes. I'm not saying I'm better than you, I'm just trying to give you advice. You're a good animator and the story didn't sound too bad until the end. All I could say was "Er...Was that meant to happen?" and I wasn't sure if you had taken the right move, but I think you've got some trick under you're sleeve.
3.5/5 - Enjoyable
Thank you. But this is just a teaser trailer and I wanted to show a little bit the phone conversation mixed up with the clips which are coming later in the film. But I thank you for your advices, I really like to get some feedbacks ^^
BTW I am looking forward to your Trailer.
-Lars
Posts [ 7 ]
