Topic: At the Beach

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At the Beach

NEW LINK
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rp5quoqHLu0

Wait, alligators live in oceans?

So yeah, this is probably the last film I make until I get a new microphone.

Last edited by bloogyo (March 19, 2010 (09:42am))

Re: At the Beach

I'm getting an error at the minute mini/sad.

Went to your youtube profile to watch it, but you need to fix that link mini/tongue.

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The animation was good, but I wasn't a fan of the sea movements at the beginning. The set wasn't much, maybe add in some background details? I enjoyed it though mini/smile. Good effort, but a bit more of a plot next time pwease? mini/tongue

Last edited by Brain Wave (March 19, 2010 (09:36am))

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Re: At the Beach

Fixed teh link!

Last edited by bloogyo (March 19, 2010 (09:43am))

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The link is broken mini/confused

EDIT- Oh, you posted the new link while I was writing how it wasn't working, haha.

Anyways, it was pretty good. The wave movements weren't the best, but they were still pretty good. I can't really think of much else to critique mini/tongue Good job

Last edited by Awesomeonomy (March 19, 2010 (10:24am))

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Brain Wave wrote:

Good effort, but a bit more of a plot next time pwease? mini/tongue

I've got a couple in the works with an actual plot:

Saving the Planet!
Computer Problems (I WANT THOSE LINES SCYPAX!! mini/tongue )

Re: At the Beach

BUMP/ DOUBLE POST! Thanks for the comments guys!  As for my wave effect, yep, I'm sure there's a better way to do it.