Topic: Scripting Help
I've been reading a lot of books on cloning lately, and Ive been inspired to make a brick film on the subject. Here is a basic story:
There is one man with a terrible, incurable disease. Unable to accept the fact that he is dying, he volunteers to have his body be cloned and inhabit a the new, healthy body, and leave his old body to rot, for an experiment by a brainy old scientist. When he finds out that the experiment is successful, he finds the doctor shot in the head, and his other body, very much alive. His old body rebels, because of his old inability to accept death. Then, there is a long cat-and-mouse chase where the police get involved. I won't spoil the end for you guys.
What I need is some help making the cat-and-mouse chase interesting. Like, adding more conflicts and ideas to make it interesting. I also need help on making the story make more sense. 
I hope explained it well here.
