Topic: my new vid

i made an awesome new vid, please check it out!!!  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kt3paJ28Ouw

Re: my new vid

mini/blankexpression

First of all, this is the wrong place to put a new film.
Second of all, don't go saying that your film is so amazing, when that is yet to be determined.
Third of all, use proper grammar and spelling, PLEASE. mini/troll

-JK

Last edited by Just Kidden (March 6, 2010 (09:43pm))

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Re: my new vid

But it was pretty good Just Kidden, try to be nice.
I like it mini/smile

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Re: my new vid

I couldn't put it in the new releases because it said I could not post a new topic

Re: my new vid

You should read the ''How to post your film'' Topic in the ''Releases'' section. mini/wink

The animation was pretty decent, Even though some parts were quite choppy.
I couldn't really get the storyline, it wasn't any clear. The only main-part I understood, was the theme.
The sets were also pretty decent, but some stuff didn't really fit in. Such as; A few parts had mixed-coloured bricks.
A few lightflickers, and the light itself was pretty dull. Try to get some more light on the scene.

After all:
Decent animation,
Decent Light,
Rather catchy storyline, and
Good quality microphone, good picture quality.
-Jack.

Re: my new vid

I liked it, just try to not do multicolor walls, and try to stop the light flickering. But I liked it a lot.

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Re: my new vid

Jackpody wrote:

You should read the ''How to post your film'' Topic in the ''Releases'' section. mini/wink

The animation was pretty decent, Even though some parts were quite choppy.
I couldn't really get the storyline, it wasn't any clear. The only main-part I understood, was the theme.
The sets were also pretty decent, but some stuff didn't really fit in. Such as; A few parts had mixed-coloured bricks.
A few lightflickers, and the light itself was pretty dull. Try to get some more light on the scene.

After all:
Decent animation,
Decent Light,
Rather catchy storyline, and
Good quality microphone, good picture quality.
-Jack.

the reason you might not get the story line was because it was a sequel. also i used multicolored bricks on purpose because it was just supposed to be some crazy insane place