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My other Mini-models of Transformers mini/smile

For more pictures of:

- Skids go to http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/179814

- Mudflap go to http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/179841

- Demolishor go to http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/179845

http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12638077011_DISPLAY.jpg

http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12638077046_DISPLAY.jpg

http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12638077035_DISPLAY.jpg

http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12638283163_DISPLAY.jpg

http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12638299413_DISPLAY.jpg

http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12638299392_DISPLAY.jpg

For more pictures of:

- Skids go to http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/179814

- Mudflap go to http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/179841

- Demolishor go to http://www.mocpages.com/moc.php/179845

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Those are incredible!

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mini/jaw Those are outstanding.

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damn...

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*BUMP*
These aren't completely finished yet, I just wan't to know how they look. This is my first try at making partially detailed sets.Anything I can improve on.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/michaelsmovies/MOCs/store_1_view_1.jpg
and
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/michaelsmovies/MOCs/store_1_view_2.jpg

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It looks okay, but the curved wall peices make the other peices on top of them look wierd, sort of like they cut off the wall, if you get what I mean.

http://www.majhost.com/gallery/BGanimations/Signatures/final_400x100.png

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Yeah, I couldn't find the pieces to make it look smooth.

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The random hand sticking up at the end of the bench is very nice.

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The window set up seems a bit too large and overdone.

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It's white.

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I Don't get it, Paweł D:
Anyways, it seems fine, The window is a little overdone.. Maybe you should change it out, to a regular LEGO Window.
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I know I've posted this before, but I have done a redesign of it and I need some help with the back end since it seems a little bland.
Teh Americana VW Microbus:

Left side
http://i45.tinypic.com/i5ykbb.jpg
Right side
http://i49.tinypic.com/xky8mp.jpg
Front
http://i47.tinypic.com/1p8qoh.jpg
Now, the back seems a little bland, what could I do?
http://i46.tinypic.com/21abp6u.jpg

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See if you can find some decorated white bricks and use them in the place of the current ones.

And michaels, I actually have no idea what that massive great white thing is in the middle of your set, but it's way too chunky. Also, you might want to change the colour of the stuff inside it so that it doesn't look like they're part of the massive thing.

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Jackpody wrote:

I Don't get it, Paweł.

Look at the hand in the right corner. It's Michaels picture really. mini/tongue

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Guys, I would appreciate it if you could critique some sets for me. They are kind of Galactic Marines. Well, that sort of thing anyway. Oh, and I must stress that THEY ARE NOT STAR WARS!
Here is a link: http://doghundredhound.wordpress.com/le … /makorosi/
The sets are both on that page. If you guys want, then I could post the pictures here, but I didn't want too because they're quite big when they're full size and I can't be bothered to resize them.

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Paweł Kamiński HWS wrote:


http://www.mocpages.com/user_images/10167/12637581467_DISPLAY.jpg

You should have to make a mini Transformer brickfilm! mini/wink

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^ It doesn't look like the joints would move too well on any of the ones he made. But if they had some articulation, that would be an epic film mini/wink

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This is my second try at making a detailed set(I think it improved greatly). This time, it's a house.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/michaelsmovies/MOCs/detailed_house_1.jpg

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Guys, you've completely ignored the rules and only one person has critiqued my set. Here it is again: http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/016/5/6/MOC_1_by_doghundredhound.jpg
PLEASE CRITIQUE THIS TIME!!!

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