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Why did you post a fuzzy picture.
Redo it maybe, and use a tripod or something to hold camera still.
Btw I'm critiquing.

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It's very simple, and doesn't look like it will be very easy to animate on.

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@michealsmovies: I didn't really intend too animate on it anyway.
@legoluke654: I would post a better picture, but I've broken the set up now so I can't.

Also, this is actually one of the more complicated MOCs I've built in my opinion.

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michaelsmovies wrote:

This is my second try at making a detailed set(I think it improved greatly). This time, it's a house.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/michaelsmovies/MOCs/detailed_house_1.jpg

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@Dog- I'd post that on the MOC thread, not the set thread.
@Michealmovies- I like it, however it's has a rather strange pattern for the tiles on the front. I'd make it more organzied, like one line of them or so and the rest just be normal, you know what I mean mini/tongue

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Is it meant to be a run-down house, or is someone living there? The rough brick pattern looks very nice, but the lamp contradicts it.

https://i.imgur.com/1JxY79v.png

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Awesomeonomy wrote:

@Dog- I'd post that on the MOC thread, not the set thread.

Actually, this is the sets and PROPS critique thread. If you go back a couple of pages, you'll see that many other people have only posted MOCs. For instance, Yanzl has posted a load of cars.

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@michaelsmovies
Cool set, maybe move the window down

http://imgur.com/qO642.png

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The window is supposed to be like that, it's high so the inside view can see the tree better, and that there is going to be a piece of furniture there.

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http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f380/kuthar46493/Set001.jpg

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I don't understand what it is ment to be?

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That's a pretty good rock ya got there.

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Daniel Sitch wrote:

I don't understand what it is ment to be?

It's supposed to be part of a mountain for my new film set in Black and White (again).
The studs leading up to it will be a track where a horse will ride.
I just need feed back on the detail of the rock/cave.

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Brickcellent wrote:

http://i51.photobucket.com/albums/f380/kuthar46493/Set001.jpg

Pretty nice Brickcellent!

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michaelsmovies: your set is extremely well detailed but it is quite monotone.  I would say add some color.
Dog: same with your set nice detail but lacks color.  It does look very high-tech to me.
Brickcellent: The only thing that seems a bit off to me is the top of the left side where you have some inverted bricks stacked.

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I think some greenery would help.

https://i.imgur.com/1JxY79v.png

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Add color? It's a stone house with a garden and walkway.

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And less mixing of light and dark grey.

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I was just thinking a small splash of color from a few accessories on or around the porch to give it some color and contrast, just a small thing I noticed.

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Dog wrote:
Awesomeonomy wrote:

@Dog- I'd post that on the MOC thread, not the set thread.

Actually, this is the sets and PROPS critique thread. If you go back a couple of pages, you'll see that many other people have only posted MOCs. For instance, Yanzl has posted a load of cars.

Which are, in fact, props if he uses them in a film. If you're not going to do so, don't post it here.
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