Topic: Hallway Potter

First of all, the reason this is in the WIPs and Tests is because it's only 5 seconds long, hardly counts as a video, and the only reason I really made it for is so that I could see how good Ratboy Productions is at editing (he did awesome by the way).

Anyways, jerky animation, simple set design, and the leangth are all non-contributing factors to how good the film is, but I think the test has a certain awesomeness that is impossible to resist. mini/smile

And if you want to see how good my animation can be (before you start all saying that I'm a bad animator), check my film Whiteout in the directory.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S0deJ66enBw

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So umm, what kind of feedback are you trying to get here?

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to many excuses, mini/rolleyes

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mini/blankexpression  I figured someone would say that. Are excuses illegal all of the sudden? Is there a limit to how many you can have?

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Well, with most tests you can easily critique them yourself, which means that uploading them to the Internet is completely pointless. By adding loads of excuses, you have proven that you have managed to work out what is good and what is not good without the help of anyone else, so you don't need any feedback.

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Wow, I never really thought of that.

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I'd like to know what people think of my editing

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Normal editing.
In wich program you did it BTW?

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Legoluke654 wrote:

Normal editing.

what do you mean by that?

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The editing is nothing special. In 7 seconds there's hardly anything there to comment on, edit-wise. Actually, in 7 seconds there's hardly anything there to comment on period.

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well...you could give feedback on how the glow appears and how it gives the illusion that its getting closer to the camera, how realistic it looks, any tips in changeing it to make it look for effective, comment on how similar or not similar it looks to real harry potter? All you've got to do is think

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Yeah it looked good, but it looked a bit weird when the one dude hit the other.

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I've never seen any films of Harry Potter.
Never even read books.
I've never have seen any footage in Harri Potter, so sorry but I can't comment on this:

Ratboy Productions wrote:

comment on how similar or not similar it looks to real harry potter?

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That would explain why you don't get it then: Harry's always sneaking around the castle at night and gets caught a bunch.

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