Topic: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

Holy crap, my attempt at doing a really quick fight scene. One hour gives me this steaming pile of crap mini/lol

Anyways, what could I improve on? (Other than everything mini/tongue )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R4AbGoOM-EE&fmt=22

Persist.

Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

It was not nearly as awful as you make it to be. I didn't like the shaky camera, though. At all.
The lighting was nice as well.
- Aaron

Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

the shakey cam was violent, but other than the short video, it was actually well done. mini/smile

Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

You overdid that camera shake, so I'd tone that down a bit. Other than that it was great!

Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

Better than mine is. The shaky camera gives it an effect but as asomeonomy said you overdid it a little. Very good though.

Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

The animation was great, but the camera shaking was overdone and made it hard to focus on the fight.
Great job otherwise. mini/bigsmile

Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

ok ok mini/lol  overall shaky can should be toned down but the actual fight animation was good.

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Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

Great job!  Except for (very) shakey camera, it was very good.  The lighting I personally think should have been brighter, but thats just my opinion.  (We're very bright people here! mini/lol )

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Re: Wow, Keshen, I respect you even more now....

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lol, everyone saying the same thing. "Good/ok/great/brilliant - except for the camera shake"

seriously, you should be proud of what you did

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