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The Walk Of Life (A Walk This Way Entry)

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A film showing the life of a boy

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I hope you enjoy.

Oh and please leave some criticism!!!
mini/sunnies

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I keep meaning to comment on this video, but I keep foregetting. I really enjoyed the concept of this film, it's like a timeline in action. There are some technical flaws such as light flicker, camera bumps, choppy animation...etc. Still, this film might be one of the most creative in the contest.

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Juggernaut Pictures wrote:

There are some technical flaws such as light flicker, camera bumps, choppy animation...etc.


mini/yes  Yes there are many technical flaws I agree BUT I only had a small time to do the animating because i was going on vacation mini/sunnies  .

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Anybody else?

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very good idea!=D yes it was some technical flaws but i enjoyed it(im not good to point out stuff when something is wrong mini/lol ) this might win! it is very creative and cool! mini/smile

I need a new name! HELP

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Thank you furybrosstudios

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BUMP!

Any body else?

(please comment even if negative)

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This is a clever idea.  I like how you transitioned between the stages of his life.  The ending is nice too.  Good job! mini/smile

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Well, Brick7 summed up the positives, very good idea. Just work a bit on your animation and lighting and you'll be in good shape.

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Thank you.

Anymore comments? mini/smile

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That was a pretty interesting concept. But I think the execution could have been improved some.
A really cool thing you could have done would be instead of just making the guy walk right into the next part of his life, you film different shots for every part of his life, and in editing, you do a transition effect where it fades into the next shot as to give it a little bit of a look of transforming. mini/smile
That would have been awesome.
But I still like the concept.

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I like your way better too. But I only had 1 week (I Need to get on with other projects mini/wink  ) to build the set,characters,animate,and finally edit the video.

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very nice idea, though i could have a better animation, i also think it would be nicer if you continued the timeline until he got old, but still nice job mini/smile oh and i'm also on the contest so i still hope i win mini/tongue (just kidding, but seriously, i'm in the contest,lol)

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Can't wait for the results!

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Not sure if this will win best animation but it's a great contender for most creative as many people are commenting on YouTube.