Topic: TOY idea: Impressionistes (working title)

Hello, I am working on a script for an entry to that Tales of Yore contest and here is my initial idea (please don't steal it mini/smile ):
So, an American man goes to Paris in the late 1800s, to learn about art with the Impressionists. France had been at war with some other country, and after the war they both agreed with a treaty of alliance, one of the conditions being that France gives this other country a famous painting as a gift. But, the painting has been stolen, and for one reason or another, the Impressionists vote for my main character to try and find it so he can prevent a war...
(this story is not based on fact AT ALL so if you have any suggestions on how to make it better, or how to make it more "accurate", then please say so. Your feedback is appreciated. I'll take the stairs.)

Last edited by topit (February 20, 2011 (07:16am))

Re: TOY idea: Impressionistes (working title)

uh, its an ok story, i think we are going to see a lot of 'stories' in the TOY contest but try to focus more on the Character not the place, his focus and all.