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Well here is a short caveman film I made as a test for my Logitech Webcam pro 9000. It only took me a day or 2. I didn't put much effort in to it but I will in future films. Sorry about the screen size of the actual video, I sort of messed that up. Enjoy!

Please give positive or constructive feedback thanks mini/smile

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That was fun to watch.  Your animation has improved, and you designed a great set and chose good sounds/voices for the film, although the credit music at the end didn't match the theme.  Something more fun and whimsical would have been better.  Overall, nice job, and I look forward to seeing your next project.

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Very Nice, The only flaw that annoyed me were the titles. The titles started half way through, and lasted the rest of the video.

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The animation was smooth, and the cave design was awesome! Noticed quite a bit of light flicker. The credits were just a little bit long. I really enjoyed this.

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Thanks for the great feedback I know to not have such long titles. and yes I should have used better ending music.
Thanks I will be sure to improve these next time mini/smile

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RedBrick1 wrote:

The animation was smooth, and the cave design was awesome! Noticed quite a bit of light flicker. The credits were just a little bit long. I really enjoyed this.

Oh by the way I fixed the light flicker problem half through making the movie, that's why there is heaps of light flicker in the first few parts. mini/smile

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Nice job. Your animation has improved a LOT. Also, Spongebob much? mini/eh

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Loved the sets.

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jstudios wrote:

Nice job. Your animation has improved a LOT. Also, Spongebob much? mini/eh

What do you mean by " Also, Spongebob much?" mini/eh

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He means that he thinks you took some ideas from Spongebob. (Specifically, Spongebob Squarepants: Before Comedy)

-JK

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Just Kidden wrote:

He means that he thinks you took some ideas from Spongebob. (Specifically, Spongebob Squarepants: Before Comedy)

-JK

Oh I see mini/lol I did kind of get some inspiration from that.(especially the start) mini/bigsmile

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I loved the big rhino thing at the beginning. Good job!

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LegOpinions wrote:

I loved the big rhino thing at the beginning. Good job!

Finally some one mentioned my strange prehistoric dinosaur thing. I thought it turned out quite well! mini/smile

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