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Mario gets arrested for street racing deadly weapons, but they have no proof of his act. So they send him to the the interrogation room were things dont go so well.This was made for tomjoetwins police contest.

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Good job! mini/yes

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mini/smile  thanks

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Well, I chuckled a little bit at the montage however there are a few technical hitches to point out. The first thing I noticed was the lack of camera angles, get a few different shots in there to spice up the scene and add to the drama your trying to convey. Also the voices did scratch a few times and a good way to fix that is try standing away from the mic at the parts while you shout and put a sock over your mic, you can also mess with the settings on your mic and find the point where it no longer scratches at high notes. The story was OK but try to give more clues to where your characters are at that point in time, I had some problems figuring out where they where.

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thanks for all your help:) .  I know some parts were a little lacking but I was in a rush to finish the entry before the contest ended, so I know it kinda sucked mini/lol . I will surely do better on my next film. Once again thanks alot mini/bigsmile.

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im becoming a better brickfilmer mini/lol

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pretty good, though you might want to have a bit more animation of the hands moving while they are talking.
keep up the good work!

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ya i know ill do better on my next brickfilm

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