This is scene one of "Trayus Academy" which is a Star Wars film I'm making but I want it to be origional, which will be hard due to the fact its SW. I also want to show BFilmers that not all SW brickfilms are the same cheesy crap, Any ways here is the script:

Scene 1:

In a typical bar on Tatooine, Rexan is playing the card game sabaac with two other men, There is also a mysterious caped figure seated in the dark corner of the bar...

Rexan pulls out a card from his sleeve... One of the men notices

Rexan: Twenty Two!

Man In Bar#1: CHEAT!... I saw your quick hand

Rexan: What... I would never cheat

Man In Bar#1: LIAR!

The man then stands up from his seat and levers the table across the room towards Rexan who swiftly dodges.

Everyone in the bar turns to look at the man...

Main In Bar#1: I know what I saw!

Rexan: Well... You saw wrong!

The man then approaches Rexan until standing face to face.

Rexan[Whisper]: What you gonna do?

With a swift punch the man hits Rexan in the stomach... Rexan is knocked to the floor.

Man In Bar#1: [Laugh] look like your down for the count

Rexan: You sure...

With unnatural speed Rexan leaps behind the man and pummels down with both fists on the mans back... the man stumbles forward, he then turns around to face Rexan

Man In Bar#1: Grrrrr!

The man then runs forward grappling Rexan over his shoulder and to the floor, the man then starts punching Rexan repeatedly...

Rexan then kicks the man in the stomach forcing him to stumble back, giving Rexan time to stand... The two men then run at each other but Rexan gets the first blow knocking the man backwards hitting his head against one of the bars walls leaving him unconscious.

Rexan then picks up some coins lying on the floor and heads towards the door

- Enjoy EliteGeek!