Animation was like 15fps accidentally turned up to 24fps, it looked like the other guy was just happy to sit there and not take any pictures. The sudden silence at 0:31 is really bad editing, you could have showed the train was there by having a light go past the set or something, and actually used that sound effect when a train went past. You do realise you can cut down sounds and move them around, right? These would have been very easy to do, even in Moviemaker. It would've been better if in the picture it was made of lego, it could've been a tottally different set, but the message would have been communicated a lot better, as the real world pictures didn't look like the same place. But this was honestly, poorly executed, and not much would have to be done to make it a much, much better film.
Sorry if I offended you, I am trying to be constructive.