Me and Rsteenoven.

I do agree I was a bit harsh, sorry about that.

-JK

I don't think it a lack of originality that's holding this film back (worked well for Avatar), but more I think the overlong script, baseline standard set design and focus on unwitty and mostly unfunny toilet humour.
That said though, the film was entertaining enough in my opinion and you're clearly showing potential as each of your films recently has generally been better than the last. Plus blobstudios did a great job as Henry Sr.

And Ozzy, if you really think that BiM is 'ruining brick-filming' then just leave now and stick to YouTube because that's simply not the case.

It never works out when you post your stuff on BiM because most of your stuff are just shorts using characters from indiana jones, Star Wars, etc. etc. with jokes that not a lot of us really find hilarious. If I were you, I would rather choose to post my films on BiM, because as you probably know the most you'll get out of an average youtuber is "olol that wuz so kewl!!!!1!1!". Trust me, all you need to do is work on your animation a little, get a few lamps, try to build some better sets and hopefully you'll make a quality film someday.

OZZYPROD, I think you shouldn't worry about size when quality is the key here.

Anyways, back on topic. The film wasn't great, but it wasn't too bad either. The humor wasn't really that funny, but I can see people taking it as a comedy. Animation was average, there is some work needed to be done, though. Lighting was so-so, & the sets were pretty bare. But overall, I don't think this film is so bad. I'd say this film is about a 2/5.

Just watched the film, and if you hadn't used Indiana Jones characters, this wouldn't have been bad at all. I can tell it was rushed, as your sets were pretty sparse, the camera work pretty basic, and of course the light flicker. But there was plenty that was done right... your animation wasn't bad at all, and the script was actually pretty good (though it wasn't my style of humor at all) and the acting was solid.

Take a little more time with everything, and don't use copyrighted characters unless the story calls for them. Those two adjustments right there will drastically improve your films. Don't get discouraged by the rudeness you were met with this in this thread... just use it to inspire yourself to shut them up with your next film.