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Well, I'm just gonna copy paste what I said on youtube:Finally, it's out, although there probably wasn't much anticipation but I'm glad it's out now. I kind of rushed at the end, and ended up not entering it on time into the Bricksinmotion 2010 contest. Sigh... anyways please read the description on the teaser trailer I released last month. Yeah. I hope you also forgive me for some of the bad continuity and my particular failure in the voice acting field. Sorry. K'bye.

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Ahem.

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I'm such a [email protected]#% for not gettin that second batch of lines in time. I see there were a lot of script changes in it. Overall I liked it a lot. Other voice actors were phenomenal though the noise in the mics were there. Again really deeply sorry bout not getting the second batch of lines in time. mini/sad
4/5

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Yes you are Vim, yes you are. I really like this film, really fits the theme of A-G. Vim, I suggest you go and cry in your basement over the fact that you didn't get those lines to Lamplight earlier. Anyway, I'll give it a 4/5.

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A nice entry, but I wouldn't say it's Avant-Garde.
It also reminded me of "Inception", but that was just a coincidence right?
I liked the lighting a lot, storyline was decent.
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3,5/5

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A nice entry, but I wouldn't say it's Avant-Garde.
It also reminded me of "Inception", but that was just a coincidence right?
I liked the lighting a lot, storyline was decent.
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3,5/5

Just to maybe clarify, it was pushing of the boundaries of dreams is what I was thinking. Taking it to the nth level.

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No, this wasn't failed. Ours was (no joke) mini/tongue .

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There wasn't enough evidence that the boy could create whatever he wanted. We hadn't seen enough of the kid getting all hot headed. And it all happened too quickly.

Nice lighting, and voice acting, overall: 6/10

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Thanks guys! mini/smile

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Yeah, the story did move way too fast. How did they figure out he was trapped in a dream? Why does the hospital have a device that can enter someone's conciousness, and why does it not still belong to the military? Surely they need it more than a hospital? And surely the boy could have made the monster go away himself if he's able to create things himself at will?

But aside from the fast-moving story, its not bad at all. The lightings good, the musics good, the majority of voice acting is good, the dream world has a really nice atmosphere when the dad enters it and I liked how the atmosphere changes as the dream turns into a nightmare. Its a shame we dont get to see more of this world, and I would have liked to have seen how they had gotten out since we are in the boys dream and therefore surely cannot escape. But this is the guy who makes 'Mr Socially Impaired' trying to bring logic into a Brickfilm.

I assume the fast moving story was due to the rushed finish - and it is a shame you ran out of time since this is a nice concept (although I haven't seen 'Inception' yet) and I would have liked to see it explored more.

But you made the best out of what you had, and therefore I give you 4/5. Nice work!

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I liked it. The pace was a little too fast and the characters were underdeveloped, but it was enjoyable. The lighting was really well done.