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Radio Death (BIM 2010-Avant Garde entry)

Radio Death

I'm actually surprised on how much I improved.

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

71 views and no feedback, really?

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

Dude, it's only been like an hour. Be patient. mini/tongue

I'm going to watch it in a little while.

-JK

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

LegoStudiosPlus, I am sorry to say this, but it was rushed. Your sets were poor looking, there were flickers, there were camera bumps, and the story was confusing. Next time, I think you need to really work on things harder, I am not trying to be mean, but I think you can do better.

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I have no idea what just happened.

Also, I don't think you improved much. The only animation that I saw that I think you improved with is when the car crashed into that guy. Oh, and you lied about forrestfire101 being in your film. mini/wink

Next time, work a little harder. Instead of rushing through something, try to make it understandable.

Sorry about my harsh criticism. I can't think of a nicer way to say it.

EDIT: And also, I don't know how on earth this fits into the theme of Avant-Garde.

-JK

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

Thanks a lot Just Kidden, what happened was FF101 got grounded, and said he had family problems, and was unable to do the lines in time mini/sad. If you're going to be a [email protected]#$ loser again, I can show you the message on skype.

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

legostudiosplus wrote:

Thanks a lot Just Kidden, what happened was FF101 got grounded, and said he had family problems, and was unable to do the lines in time mini/sad. If you're going to be a [email protected]#$ loser again, I can show you the message on skype.

Wow, what the heck? Jeez, mister. No, I'd rather not see the message. BTW, what do you mean by being a loser again? Do you mean when I blocked you on skype? The reason why I blocked you on skype was because I felt you were being annoying. I got tired of listening to your rants.

And you could have said that in the first post that he was grounded so people would have known. mini/tongue

I'm sorry if I hurt your feelings or whatever, I was just saying what I thought of the film. If you want you can go to one of my films and talk about how you didn't understand it and all the stuff you want to say about me. mini/rolleyes

-JK

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

No, I enjoy all of your films, but you always give me a hard time about, "Oh you just got him so you'd get more views" no, Keshen is a great voice actor!

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

...I just realized something...

LSP, WHY IS DAN IN YOUR SIGGY?




Anyway, just keep working on your craft. I agree with the criticism on this thread.

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

I said "It'll probably get you more views, huh?". After you told me you got him because it fit the part, I said "sure." There's two things that could be, one is
A. It could be sarcastic.
or
B. It could be agreeing with you. mini/tongue

I do agree that you got him because he is a great voice actor, but I also think there was part of you that got him so you'd get some more views. Who wouldn't? mini/tongue I mean, if I were to get Keshen, I'd be excited that he's a great voice actor AND he'd probably get me more views.

-JK

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

who's dan?

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

You do realize that the deadline isn't for another 2 days, right? Your film is now invalid for entry.

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Dan:

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And:


You do realize that the deadline isn't for another 2 days, right? Your film is now invalid for entry.

WRONG, entries could be posted starting the 20th. Also, there's only about 5 hours left in the contest.

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Sméagol wrote:

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The deadline for submissions will be Sunday, July 25th, 2010 at 8:00 a.m. UTC.

Films may be submitted as early as the beginning of July 2010, though they cannot be made public until after the deadline has passed.

From the first post in the thread BiM 2010: Avant-Garde.

Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

Actually Scypax, Dan doesn't have the thingy under his lip. While Signature guy does.

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From the Submission rules on the BiM 2010: Avant-Garde thread:

"2) Post your video as a video response to this video.  This may be done as soon as July 20th, 2010.  The video can not be available online prior to July 20th."

Never mind about the time thingy, I was mistaken.


And RealBrick, I believe he does.

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Re: BiM 2010: Radio Death

Unfortunately, I have to agree with the criticism here. It was just too confusing. It really doesn't help being short, either. Still, I must commend you for getting an entry in.

Real Brick wrote:

Actually Scypax, Dan doesn't have the thingy under his lip. While Signature guy does.

A dimple. That's Mark Hamill's dimple!

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I'm sorry, but I didn't understand that film. The animation had a pretty big improvement from the last films you've made. The whole thing was still insanely rushed and wasn't executed very well.

And please don't yell at Just Kidden and such for critisism.

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Truly, LSP, to put it bluntly, I think you need to grow up. If you can't take criticism, do not post your films publicly. I am not going to repeat the critique already proposed, but, the modulated deep voice really annoyed me. If you only worked on this for a month, too, there was no way you were going to compete with people who had been making their's since September. I am not looking to start a feud, actually, just the opposite. I am simply saying, if people just let people's critique go by without defending aggressively, this forum may not be declining in quality...

Persist.

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MOL wrote:

Truly, LSP, to put it bluntly, I think you need to grow up.

He's 11 (I think), he doesn't need to grow up.