Topic: ORPHANS (Unfinished) Commentary

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ORPHANS (Unfinished) Commentary

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Please don't be too harsh with this film. It was one of the hardest films to film. Three orphans (Sergei, Bert, & Tera) try to find their parents while dodging dangerous obstacles.

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Re: ORPHANS (Unfinished) Commentary

Over two minutes of no picture? The animation was a bit choppy, and I noticed quite a bit of light flicker and some change in the color. Try using smaller intervals in your animation and raise the fps. Also either use a backdrop or build your sets up to cover any bare parts of your set, nobody likes seeing a lot of the room. The story was also very hard to follow.

Last edited by Blacitch (June 28, 2010 (05:12pm))

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It's at 15 fps at almost every picture and the title says that it has commentary.  Not to be mean but just responding to what you said.

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Re: ORPHANS (Unfinished) Commentary

Then simply try to use larger intervals or more consistent intervals, some of your animation was pretty good. Yes I under stand the commentary, but commentary doesn't necessarily mean no picture.

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Okay, next time we won't use a blank screen.  And the story probably would have made sense if we had finished it and added the lines.  As for the sets, we realize that we did not have practically any so that's one of the reasons why we canned it.

Last edited by Juggernaut Pictures (June 28, 2010 (05:20pm))

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Re: ORPHANS (Unfinished) Commentary

try putting the camera eye level with your actors.