Hmmmm....that was....a novel experience....
It COULD be amazing but all you have to do is tweak a few flaws....first of all, NEVER let your audience see where the base-plate ends, secondly, try to to keep your camera still, if it's not your camera, paste your base-plate down. Thirdly make the action and speech a little more clear, I honestly thought it was the same person talking all the time. And try to adjust the lighting, that's all I really have to say, do those and that brickfilm will be the best this galaxy has seen!
Good-day!