That was funny .
I liked the idea and the set up. It was set up nicely and it made me laugh. It reminded me of American Pie.
The animation was choppy, but that's because it was filmed with 10 FPS. Use 15 FPS, everyone here does. I think your animation is good, you just need to raise the FPS. I liked the sets aswell.
Try to light your sets more evenly, some parts were too bright and some too dark. Try to reflect the light with a sheet of paper, this will help you get a more even lighting.
Overall: Good job, but too bad it has a low FPS.