Topic: Brawl - Shark

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Brawl - Shark

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the you tube version isn't the original video submitted to the brawl contest, but I just changed the music to a more appropriated one...anyway you can always download the original version...

Last edited by MPfist0 (September 2, 2009 (02:52am))

Re: Brawl - Shark

That was nice. The story was easy to follow, although the movie lacked dialogue and sound effects. I also liked the cinematography, some shots were well thought. I however would have gone with the total silent film look. Dirt on the film, titlecards and black and white. But that's just my opinion. Good job!:)

Re: Brawl - Shark

well,I'd like to see a little more critiques/reviews.
Anyway, infurno, about the silent film I definitely agree, but I just wanted to make the story more clear.

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That was a beautiful story. mini/sad

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I quite enjoyed this one. There were a few grammatical errors in the subtitles (maybe consider having someone proofread your dialogue in the future? mini/wink ) and a few moves were a bit jerky, but otherwise, very good job.

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