Alright, I started writing a script called "The Inventors" I would like if you could take the time to read mey ideas and give constructive criticism.

It's about two doctors named John and Kyle. They both lose their medical licences in a malpractice lawsuit. So they both decide to invent things that are only comprihendable by the imagination.  But of course something goes wrong and usually their friend Laura (who still is a doctor) has to clean up the mess

What do you think?