Topic: Icy Juncture [THAC XVII]

Directory Link

Icy Juncture


Blue and Orange pieces, 15sec leeway
Theme: Opportunity

Re: Icy Juncture [THAC XVII]

Great job.  At first, I thought

Spoiler (click to read)

it would turn out that the murders were a human taking them apart for parts.

Re: Icy Juncture [THAC XVII]

I like it! Very expositional, with all the massive info dumps, but the story was interesting. The gradual transformation of the bad guy was a great touch, but the climactic “fight scene” didn’t last very long. Would have liked to see more after all the build-up.