Bricks in Motion
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Mini Bar the fourth episode
Gary questions Jimmy about off track betting. Angie is annoyed with a customer.
And another episodes drops!
Wow, you're getting these done fast.
Once again, there are some audio balancing problems, with the transition "beeps" blaring when compared to most other sounds. Again, a bit of leveling there would go a long way.
Also, 30 seconds of credits for a 2 1/2 minute film is a bit long. I know it's a fun joke, flashing two title cards for yourself, but perhaps to save time, you could squash them into "Created and assembled by..." to save on time.
It's nice to see recurring characters, like the "Death" looking guy. It allows us the chance to learn more about them, and if nothing else, see more of their relationship with Jimmy. Also, you're totally making me regret my "leeching of free restaurant wi-fi" days from college. Now I feel bad... 
(Don't worry, I didn't do it often)
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