Topic: Mini Bar The third Episode
Mini Bar The third Episode
Jimmy has to tell Boba Fett of a problem. Gary surprises Jimmy
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Mini Bar The third Episode
Jimmy has to tell Boba Fett of a problem. Gary surprises Jimmy
The link is giving me a 404 error. Here's a working link.
Also, it's a bit confusing that the titles of all three MiniBar episodes are simply "MiniBar" on Youtube. You should at least add (Part 1) or "Episode 2" on them to help viewers track down the specific episode they are looking for.
The camera angles vastly improve after the 1 minute mark. It's an almost night and day difference in my ability to become immersed in the world and its characters. Plus, the exchange about the tickets is amusing. Good job!
While the presentation seems to hint the music at 0:14 is really loud, to viewers, it's hardly discernible. Then, the transition noise at 0:34 comes blasting in, and the voices inhabit the middle ground. Proper audio balancing is really hard, but if there's one area that this short could have improved on, that would probably be it.
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