Topic: Lego Army Film Idea EDITED

Script

Scene One
Characters: Captain, Soldiers 1, 2, 3, 4, 5

C: You’ll all be shipping out today, amphibious assault on Croatian Beach Heads across the northern shore. There are four beaches, Red beach, Blue Beach, Green Beach, and then Yellow Beach. You will land ashore and attempt to take out the Guard posts. Is that clear? You will be on green beach with me.

SC: Sir Yes, Sir!

C: Good, I am coming ashore with you boys so try not to get killed. Dismissed *salutes*

SC: *Salutes, then begins to walk out with the captain.

Scene Two
Characters: Captain Soldiers 1, 2,3,4,5 and two guards

C: *in the landing craft* we need to take out the guard posts and secure the beach. Then we wait for command to radio…in.

S1: What about…What about the mines?

C: Do as best as you can, we will be taking heavy MG fire, so be prepared.

S3: 30 SECONDS!

C: Weapons free check ammo and grenades. See you on the beach

*after about 30 seconds*

S3: Clear the Ramp! Go-Go-Go!

S2: *Gets shot immediately*

*Soldiers and Captain get out and crawl up the watery shore. S5 gets shot in the water and S1 gets shot as the get out of the water. Captain and S3 and 4 stay behind debris. Shot ricochet around them.*

C: Open fire! *Fires blindly at the enemy.

S4: Fire a rocket!

S3: *gets rocket prepped* FIRE IN THE HOLE! *fires*

*zooming to the Guards a shell splits between them and kills them outright.*

S3-4: *Cheering*

C: Don’t celebrate yet, we have a lot of work to be done…



Scene 3

Characters: Captain (on radio), Soldiers 3-4 watching for enemies.

C: Command this is Green Beach, over

R: Green beach we have orders for you to hold you position until reinforcements can arrive, over.

C: When is...When are reinforcements going to arrive?

R: Around 0400 tomarrow captain.

C: Aphirmitive, Green beach out.

R: Command out.

C: Ok we need to hold the beach until reinforcemtns arrive in about 18 hours.

S3: What are we up against?

C: Infantry maybe artillery if they ca slog it over here.

S4: Should we prepare defenses?

C: Yes, you *points to Soldier 3* go set up walls adn you, *points to soldier 4* help me set up our radio post.

S3-S4-SIR YES, SIR!

C: Very good...


Scene 4

Characters: Captain, Soldier 3-4, Enemy soldier 1-4 and enemy commander.

C: Anyone spot the enemy?

S3: ummm, no captain...not yet.

C: good....

S4: wait! There is 5 of them, ones an officer!

C: uh oh! Everyone get to your positions!

S3-S4: *runs to positons*

C: Fire on my command *pulls out weapon then pauses* Not yet....Not yet.......Not...FIRE!

C-S3-4: Opens fire on the advancing troops

ES1-2: *returns fire*

C: Die DIE DIE!!!

ES1: *get shot in the head and flies back exposing his face through the helmet*

S3: Boomshickalaca!

EC: Shoot them shoot th...*is interupted when a bullet strikes his chest* man...down...ughh...

S4: got the captain

C: Nice shot!

E2: Die cowards! DIE! Why won't...? *is struck by a bullet* ughhh

C: Woohoo!

E3-4 *Start advancing to avenge there comrads*

C: *pulls out RPG* Good night *fires*

E3-4: AHHHHHH!!!

S3-4: Woohoo yeah...way to go capt'n!

C: Report...to command...mission accomplished!

EPISODE 1 ENDS (maybe it continues it isnt long enough)

Last edited by Graphic Films (May 22, 2009 (03:00pm))

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Re: Lego Army Film Idea EDITED

The first 2 scenes should be good if you can pull it off, scene 3 ruined it for me though, it doesn't make sense at all to me, I know that's the point, but it doesn't make sense.

Re: Lego Army Film Idea EDITED

Scene 2 is almost a copy of the intro of Saving Private Ryan, I would change that.
And like Micky, scene 3 did not make any sense.

-Donsalvatore

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Re: Lego Army Film Idea EDITED

I updated it

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