Topic: Candy- My first screenplay (2002)

I recently unearthed the first screenplay I ever wrote: Candy.  A really condensed version was submitted to the Animation challenge, but the original is 35 pages long, and supposed to be in the style of an independent comedy.  Before I wrote this, I resolved to myself never to use obscenity in any script that I write and this doesn't, but there is some adult-themed dialogue.  I wanted to advise up front so you may use your own discretion.

You can read eight pages of it here:
http://holding-our-own.tumblr.com/post/ … 5948/candy

Please post your thoughts.

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