Topic: F L A S H

so we made our film teacher take us underneatth the school and it was pretty neat so we decided to shoot something down there. i wrote the script and edited this and i sort of directed it which means i held the microphone and gave Helpful Advice.
https://vimeo.com/125971592
its a horror film

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HI.
I enjoyed this much.  The first thing I noticed was the still frame "avatar" you used: "Poop Here!" Hilarious!

The framing and lighting were all very dramatic.  The use of sound, too.  It was a cool set to use; looks post-apocalyptic.  I like how you deconstructed the very concept of photography in the second half.  The only thing I didn't like was the nature flash-flicker effects, which looked to digitized for me and therefore not natural.  But I'm being super-picky here.  I know what you went for and it still turned out dramatic by use of contrast.  Send us more!

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mini/eek thank you!! n the flash things were supposed 2 look like that bc they were literal camera flashes but i see what u mean.