You did a fantastic job not only summing up all that info in 20 seconds, but also stuffing in such a high number of scenes and sets without it feeling unnecessarily rushed. It was fast-paced, but felt like it was meant to be, and didn't feel unnatural.
I gave you a pretty high score on production values, again, thanks to the high number of good sets, and the animation quality. Like Rio, I love that three days later clip. It's a technique I haven't seen used before, and it worked perfectly in this setting.
You asked about your originality, and I think I can help answer that.
The concept of a face-paced montage telling the story of Jesus is nothing new to EASTER. It's such a staple that I'd be surprised if there wasn't such an entry one year. Telling his whole life was new, but no matter how wonderful and lovely the Biblical story is, adapting in a fast-paced montage just isn't that original.
Hope that helps.