Bricks in Motion
We are a friendly filmmaking community devoted to the art of stop-motion animation using LEGO® and similar construction toys. Here, you can share your work, join our community of other brickfilmers, and participate in periodic animation contests!
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Hunting Incident
This is my second film for my channel. It took around a week to finish. Everything in this video was made by me.
Any critiques or suggestions for future films are welcome.
Last edited by Rivvm m (January 6, 2015 (07:38pm))
Hunting Incident
This is my second film for my channel. It took around a week to finish. Everything in this video was made by me.
Any critiques or suggestions for future films are welcome.
YOU MAKE LEGOs?!?!?!
All jokes aside, short and funny in a dark way. The animation and lighting were all good for the purpose, not amazing but there wasn't anything bad to pick out of them. If this is your second brickfilm I am impressed with the quality. The cup spilling was a very nice touch. In terms of suggestions, this was in a way supposed to be a comedy so maybe get the timing and voicing down in a more comedic way in the future. And also, I personally found the footstep sounds annoying. But again, I found it amusing, and so therefore it has already succeeded in its purpose. Keep up the good work. : D
YOU MAKE LEGOs?!?!?!
I actually thought of that when I wrote it. 
Thank you for your feedback on my short. I agree that some of the sounds don't completely fit / are annoying. I will improve with practice. As for the timing and voice acting, I agree with that as well. Again, practice, some experience, and some more practice should help me improve.
Thank you,
-Rivvm m
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