It's great!
You did amazingly with the sets, animation, and camera work, and the voice acting only increases the quality.
The first shot blew me away, and really shows off your skill with camera movements.
The use of non-Lego elements was handled well, as was the use of little color in that one scene.
Nothing really stuck out as needing improvement, it's just that well made.

The plot seems very similar to my " Rooftops ]". And that general idea was used in another entry, though your film does much better with it. It's a very well done film, and it's too bad that you couldn't have finished in time.

Thank you, guys!

I didn't think of that when I wrote the screenplay, but when you mention it, I do realize the similarities to your film. The concept is well used, that's for sure, but that's probably because more people than you and I find it interesting.

Please, do continue to brickfilm! Glad you liked the film, though.

That opening scene was great.  I'm kinda glad this missed BRAWL because that means you had the time to make it better.