From experience, I'd say try to cut that down to 3 episodes. Normally, I write 10, see how much of the overall plot and the character development needs to stay in, and get rid of all of the excess, especially when one of my projects is a licensed theme. That's not to say you have to, but it's a suggestion.

How long do you think each will be? And which villains are you planning on using? Kingpin sounds interesting. You could also go for Shocker, Vulture, Jackal (who sets off the whole Clone Saga) and Hydro-man. In fact, if you had Hydro-man and Sandman team up, they could merge like in the comics and become Mud-thing!

Sorry, I'm a huge nerd.

I'd also suggesting goin on YouTube and watching as many other Spider-man brickfilm series as you can. In the past few years a ton of them have sprung up, and they're all pretty much identical but at different skill levels, so you may want to make sure your story differs as much as possible to ensure that you stand out (if that's possible when there are so many).

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

Why not just do Clone Saga from the start? Set it up so that it's clear what Jackal has done, but then there are effectively three Spider-men running around New York. That'd be cool.

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

Aren't people already pretty familiar with Pete though? I mean, there are two movies series, decades worth of comics, at least three cartoon series (off the top of my head) and a mess of games. I think you could get away with very little of Parker's characterisation and focus on other characters if you wanted to, but if you don't, that's cool.

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

Here's the first villain:

I've always wanted to see him in a lego animation. The pilot script is 80% complete. Casting call should be up by friday.

This is key.

Some minor plot-things nobody's done in brickfilms that it might be worth considering are Pete's internship (and later job) at Horizon Labs, the Aunt May/Doc Ock wedding (they dated for ages) and Peter's eventual worst nightmare: he has a dream with his parents in, but their faces are completely blank - he's completely forgotten what they looked like, and they were actually such a small part of his life.

Also, read The Amazing Spider-Man Vol. 2 #38, which is when Aunt May finally finds out that Pete is Spider-man. It's (pardon the pun) amazing stuff, and might inspire you.

"Nothing goes down 'less I'm involved. No nuggets. No onion rings. No nothin'. A cheeseburger gets sold in the park, I want in! You got fat while we starved on the streets...now it's my turn!" -Harley Morenstein

Here is the casting call:
http://www.bricksinmotion.com/forums/po … 2/#p327002

Just some quick notes:

Your keying job is very rough. I don't know if you're using a green screen or you just keyed out your background.
There wasn't really much establishment. Story, characters, plot, etc. You can't expect people to start watching a web series when they have no idea of what it's about. I understand this was made in 4 hours but you need to hint to things that are going to be showing up in future episodes. Not to mention, trailers are usually clips from the already finished product.

You should really bump up the frame rate on your animation, it's still very choppy an rough. Even in post you can speed up your output speed to 15FPS if that's what you fancy.

The music was cool, but it was the only redeeming factor of the video. Their was no ambient music when the cheif of police asked who he was so it felt like they were in a soundproof room which took away from the video.

Just my last thing, you need to watch some other peoples take on their version of the story. Most people are bound to create a series that has already been done before and redoing it won't gain you any fans because they've already seen this production done before.

Best of luck with your endeavors.

It looked better than the animation

You were right about the animation, and the VFX. But, I don't think the song really fit what was going on in the trailer. In other words, I think some riveting musical score would have been more relevant than a rap song. But anyways, the logo turned out good. However, don't we already have enough Spiderman brickfilms out there, with that title?